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Comish - Out for the Evening

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Full-background, gradient-shaded comish for Grael-Dragon of FA of his dragon, Grael, and Caina, his date. ^^

Actually did this a couple weeks ago, but Grael wanted me to hold posting it until now so it would be a surprise for Caina. Those vases? You see those vases in the background? Inspired by some pottery I helped find in Israel. XD

Commissions are still avail~

Thanks Grael! Happy you guys like it!

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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Ah, the shading on this is very nice and coherent with the colors of the background/foreground lighting. The lineart is clean and smooth, and a lot of elegance is shown in their outfits. All in all, a very clean and consistent piece.

There are some points that can be improved on, however; the first thing that caught my eye was the anatomy of the she-wolf; her chest seems so large that it's pushing her away from the dragon, her wrist is poking abnormally far out at the bottom, and her fingers are not falling flush to the dragon's chest. I recommend trimming down the chest the next time you draw something similar, and place your hand on a slightly curved surface to observe how it follows the curve.

Otherwise, this is a very solid piece; the background is clean and not distracting, the lighting isn't too powerful, and the poses are dynamic, yet graceful. Keep up the good work!