You want to be careful with frontal views and eyes. They appear a little too close in this view and appear as if they would be on a profile-side shot instead of a frontal one. They also shouldn't be slanting like they are around the center of the face.
I've made it a force of habit to check related animals(if any) for these kinda things in the middle of a doodle. It really helps to check for something with another thing that's as close as the doodle you're going for(wow that sounded like nonsense lol).
You're welcome though, and I can't wait to see the update!