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Line-Art Comish - Faded Crimson by TwilightSaint Line-Art Comish - Faded Crimson by TwilightSaint
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Detailed line-art commission for Serandite of FA of his dragon of the same name.

Dang, this turned out lovelier than I expected. I tried something different with the wings - more reptilian than mammal-looking, particularly with the wing 'hand.' I rather like it, and will probably play around with it a bit more. What does anyone thing of it? I think they look more elegant...

Also trying to make the wing size a bit more believable, haha, especially since he's a feral dragon.

Line-art commissions are still avail!

Thanks Serandite!

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Okay I've haven't done these very much so bear with me if I get any of this wrong

This is actually an overall beautiful drawing, I really love the lines! The only thing that seems a bit off to me is the head/neck. It just looks a tad smaller and cut off from the rest of the body. The necks of animals or any creature really connects with the chest then to belly, here it looks as if the chest is a bit missing and all I see is 2 shoulder blades and neck connecting.

The vision part, I would give a 3.5 stars. The anatomy is very nice and looks like the dragons is enjoying himself, not too tense but still has a nice relaxed look to him and his body features.

For originality, a solid 3 stars. I see a bit of flying dragons in a pose like this often but every one is different in their own way!

Technique, 4.5 stars. I really love the lines and the varying light and heavy lining to it. The texture is also very nice too! The gradient look to the colors sends a nice sense of warmth to the whole drawing and it gives a nice shading to the dragon itself!

The impact I would give another 4.5 on. The coloring and feel to the whole drawing is very warm and has a carefree feel to it!

All in all this is a very gorgeous drawing, keep it up!
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Lizardhound Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I love the reptilian wings! :)
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TwilightSaint Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thank you! :) I like them too - maybe more than my other wings. ^^
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Lizardhound Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
IMO, reptilian wings are better on dragons because, well, they're a kind of reptile. Ish. They certainly have the looks of one.
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BlackW1nd Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Not bad.
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TwilightSaint Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Student Digital Artist
B-)
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Dawn-Writer Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
the wings are beautiful, and yes very realisitic: a huge dragon needs huge wings in order to fly after all.
I like this <3
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TwilightSaint Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thanks! <3
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Absur-D Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Student Filmographer
your dragons are just breathtaking :D
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TwilightSaint Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thank you! :D
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Absur-D Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Student Filmographer
no problem ^^
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